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Re: Meet Richard - An Odoo Story

by
Olivier Lenoir
- 09/10/2015 02:21:22
Hi,

Thanks,
Some elements inside, telle-me your point of view.

Yours

Olivier

Le 10/09/2015 06:08, Eva Pinter @ xpansa a écrit :
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Hi All,

I’ve been looking into the great French translation done by Olivier and have a few corrections proposals. (I did not read the english version)

1. Proposal for page 29

Il a réduit ses coûts d’un tiers et a amélioré sa productivité de 110%
exact,
Mais... de 75000 à 18000, ça fait combien ?
Fabien pourra peut-être expliquer son texte original :-)

et... ce n'est pas SA productivité mais LA productivité de son entreprise
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2. Proposal for page 32
…de partage de calendriers, de gestion des congés,…

Offre d’emploi sur le web

3. Proposal for page 18
…Cette croissance provoque la réduction des marges….

là, j'ai voulu conserver l'opposition croissance/décroissance
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4. Proposal for page 22
Richard décida qu’il était temps de moderniser…
SI pour IT, j'ai voulu rester plus près du texte original
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5. Proposal for page 2

Un dirigeant remarquable
Un remarquable dirigeant
me semble ajouter une petite nuance : un excellent dirigeant et un dirigeant qui sort du lot...
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On 9 Sep 2015, at 09:34, Olivier Lenoir <olivier.lenoir@free.fr> wrote:

Hi Fabien,

Here is a French version.
http://fr.slideshare.net/remotesignature/odoomeetrichardfr

Tell me if you approve this translation

Thanks

Olivier

Le 07/09/2015 17:42, Fabien Pinckaers a écrit :
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Hello,

A few years ago we wrote a slideshow "Meet Richard" to explain the value of Odoo as an integrated management software. This communication worked great so we decided to make an updated version of "Meet Richard".

We are looking for help in the community to translate the presentation in different languages. If you are ready to help, can you:

2/ Translate to your own language
3/ Publish on Slideshare and send us the link so that we can promote it


During the translation process, do not hesitate to replace the logos by local players. As an example, in French, we should replace Quickbooks by Sage, and Magento by Prestashop. (only leaders on the market, otherwise it's better to keep existing logos).

Please do not publish the english version yet. We are fixing a few typos before distributing it more widely.


Thanks,

Fabien


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Olivier Lenoir
13 av de la Porte Chaumont
75019 Paris
+33688965603
09 53 97 60 82

Free software user for 24 years ago
Linux user since 1998, You won't find me on FaceB??!
www.ubuntu.com, www.odoo.com,
www.musescore.org, www.libreoffice.org...

There is no difference between air conditioning and a computer :
both become useless when you open windows.

Si Microsoft inventait quelque chose qui ne se plante pas ce serait un clou.